Once upon a time there was a kid named Jose that he found two flying shoes. He took them to his grandma's house, his grandma was blind so when she got out the restroom she put the wrong shoes. The ones that she put were the flying shoes she started to fly so high that she couldn't breathe. When the shoes got tire she fell in Paris trying to find Jose but she didn't know were she was. When the shoes were relaxed she started flying again and she never came back and Jose was alone. THE END.
The story was very creative and funny.
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